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Japanese
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Battle Athletess Daiundoukai |
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English
name(s):
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Battle Athletes Victory |
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Overall
description of edits/changes:
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The openings, endings, and previews were removed
between episodes and a follow-up 'where are they now' segment was omitted.
A major change was made to a flashback sequence in the English dub for episode
20. DETAILED REPORT |
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Reviewed
by:
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Jim Lazar (Webmaster/animeprime.com) with portions by Bernabe Apolinario and Kenneth Lee |
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Date
reviewed/updated:
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Wednesday, April 14, 2004 7:26 PM |
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North
American company releasing title:
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Pioneer |
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Japanese
version that North American version is based on:
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As broadcast on Japanese television |
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Description
of what effects the edits/changes had on the original story/plot (opinion)
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The changing of the flashback sequence severely affected the story and was completely in disregard for the reason that the scene was there in the first place: To detail how Mylanda's hatred for Lahrri developed. Although it would have been nice to have the 'where are they now' segment on the North American release, it didn't affect the rest of the story. The previews for the next disc being grouped together at the end of each disc DID contain spoilers for upcoming stories. |
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Detailed
description of opening and ending changes
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The openings and endings were removed between
episodes and the next episode previews for the next disc were grouped
together at the end of the disc (the previews for episodes 2-4 were omitted
entirely).
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Detailed
description of English dub changes
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Dialogue in the English audio & hearing-impaired sub tracks of episode 20 on volume 7 was altered. This alteration occurs right after the title screen, "Tomodachi (Friends)", at around the 2:00 mark. This is an important scene because it reveals the reason for Mylandah's hatred of Lahrri. It is a flashback to a year before (4998, when Lahrri would eventually become Cosmo Beauty), when Mylandah witnesses Mr. Miracle selecting Lahrri for exclusive training. It is revealed that they were once teammates and friends, but Mr. Miracle's decision drove a wedge between them. That is exactly what that scene depicts when watched with Japanese audio and/or English subtitles (sub track 1). However, when you watch with English audio and/or hearing-impaired subtitles (sub track 2) you get a different story. Let me point out that the scene is never explicitly stated as a flashback, i.e. there is no caption reading "1 year ago". The dialogue is supposed to infer that it takes place before Lahrri ever became Cosmo Beauty in the first place. But the English dub changes the conversation between Mr. Miracle and Lahrri into one of "reclaiming" her title, setting it in the current year, 4999. To further this notion, Lahrri asks Mr. Miracle why he's abandoning Kris for her. This doesn't make any sense and I have no idea why the dialogue was changed. Either it was a mistake on the part of person who wrote the dub script or they intentionally changed it. |
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Detailed
description of name and title changes
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| Lahrri's last name was Feldnunt in the Japanese audio and subtitle track 1 and Fernando in the English audio and subtitle track 2 (hearing impaired track). This is probably just due the way it's pronounced than an intentional change like other name changes often are. |
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Detailed
description of video edits
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The 'where are they now' segment showed what happened to the main characters several years after the events shown in the 26 episodes. The following is a brief description of the missing segment (may contain SPOILERS) with screen shots courtesy of Kenneth Lee:
Intro: This whole ending starts off with a shot of Akari,
Ichino, Kris hugging. 1. Jessie Gurtland: It shows her back in New York, teaching
young street kids the proper way to practice Track / running. She's kneeling
next to the little kid, showing her the proper starting sprint pose. 2. Ayla: She's quietly sitting at home pregnant with a 2nd(!)
child. Her husband rushes across the screen in the background carrying
their 1st baby who's crying, and then in the next frame she's quieted
down. 3. Tanya: She's back in Africa (in the wilds) wearing a
cheetah animal skin and carrying a spear. She's racing (and outrunning!)
a cheetah. 4. Ling Pha: Ling is still running away from her grandfather
and the Ling Family Giant Balloon of Death . 5. Anna: Anna's running (or working in) a restaurant now.
She's wearing a cute waitress outfit and her little sister (or was it
older?) is working with her now, but she's freaking out (almost spilling
some food) as a handsome, young, blond-haired guy walks in: Jacky Bryant
from VIRTUA FIGHTER 3! (No Joke - you only see his back, but he's got
Jacky's hair, and he's wearing Jacky's patented leather jacket (same design
and everything)! Very funny.) 6.Lahrri and Mylandah: Both of them are quietly sitting
in a library, leaning against some bookshelves studying some books. Both
are wearing very elegant, lady-like clothes, with Lahrri wearing an formal,
Old English-type blouse. 7. Yumika Karashima (female Doctor for the students): She's
attending a friend's wedding, wearing a beautiful elegant, blue evening
gown. She catches the bride's bouquet that was thrown, but it shows her
fumbling it and dropping it! 8. Ichino's Little Brother: He's on a Quiz Show and it shows
him getting excited and swinging at the Osaka News Reporter (the one who
reported on the events in many of the episodes). The Osaka Reporter seems
to be the host of this Quiz Show. 9. Eric (Mr. Miracle's traitorous assistant): Eric is sitting
quietly in his new medical clinic... for ANIMALS! There's a bear, a horse,
a dog, and a goat, sitting there waiting for treatment, and they all have
Akari's cute bunny-ears-type hair! 10. Grant Oldman (Headmaster for the school): He's standing
proudly (in his traditional Japanese outfit) riding atop a WHALE in the
middle of the ocean! 11. Then it pans to the newly built AKARI KANZAKI MUSEUM!
There are lots of school girls attending / visiting the museum. Then the
tour guide - dressed in the original track uniform used by Akari and friends,
also wearing a "Bunny Ears" hair piece - shows off their greatest
monument: An Akari statue with all 3 versions of her Akari House! Hahahaha
(it's so cute)! 12. FINALLY, it shows Ichino "Itchan," Kris, and
then Akari all running (with Akari in the lead, of course) - all wearing
cute, regular "normal girl's clothes" - in a giant field next
to Akari's house. They are running towards a giant "GOAL" sign
that is painted into the field behind their house. The End. |
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What
you can do to get the unedited version (import and domestic)
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Import version:
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